Personal Poem: "My Life's Journey"

[Pen>Sword]

Hey ya'll,

I made a personal poem about my life. I know it's not perfect as some don't perfectly rhyme. This is basically a series of rants, realizations and gratefulness. There are so many regrets that I've made in my life, and yet, so much to be thankful of. But I still think that suicide is the answer of all my problems.

I hope you'll like it, and find it relatable.

Thanks.

Life is such a puzzle,
It's full of work and hassle.

Expensive and troubling as it could be,
Why did God created me?

So many regrets I have done,
I have made more than one.

Many methods there are to choose,
But I have so many to lose.

Organ and brain damage could be one,
Why is it so hard to be gone?

As soon as I get brain damage,
My parents will search through my rummage.

I did not sign up for this,
This poem will make pro-life hiss.

It's my life as a consenting adult,
No need to make me halt.

Mind your business, and I'll mind mine,
This is my call, not thine.

As always, I pray to the Divine,
That I could grow a spine.

As I coast through the day,
At the end, at bed, I lay.

Nobody is immortal,
We will all cross some sort of portal.

As I bid adieu,
Hopefully, you will miss me too.

When I'm dead, don't cry,
All I want is a goodbye.

Thank you all, thank you for your sacrifices,
I cannot bear my personal crisis.

Mom and Dad, I wish I can repay you,
But I can't stay, my life has been too blue.

 

[Midgardsorm]

This is beautifully written. It seems like it's your thoughts connecting directly to me.

I used to write a few poems too, not nearly as good as yours or some users here, but it was cool.

I liked, it's not all verses that needs to rhyme. It's like a song, harmony sometimes is not in the rhyme,but in the meaning of the words.

 

[Pen>Sword]

This is beautifully written. It seems like it's your thoughts connecting directly to me.

I used to write a few poems too, not nearly as good as yours or some users here, but it was cool.

I liked, it's not all verses that needs to rhyme. It's like a song, harmony sometimes is not in the rhyme,but in the meaning of the words.

Thanks a lot! I'm glad that you like it. I have a long way to go. My poetry skills is stuck at elementary level, thinking that everything has to rhyme.

 

[FuneralCry]

I really like this poem. It is really well written, you are talented.

 

[Pen>Sword]

I really like this poem. It is really well written, you are talented.

Aww, thanks. That means a lot to me.