Limbo - A poem I wrote

[Moegetaku]

LIMBO

Can someone cut my wings
As desire to fly eludes me
The passion to cross universe
Is just not there anymore
Can someone cut my fangs
As desire of protection eludes me
The motivation to fight for myself
Is just not there anymore
Can someone cut my brain
As desire to think rationally eludes me
The passion to think about things
Is just not there anymore
Can someone cut my heart
As desire to feel eludes me
The passion to love someone
Is just not there anymore

 

[apathetic.]

Very nice I wish I could write poems too

 

[BrokenHopes]

Great poem, thank you for sharing it!

 

[A_miStake_of_NATURE]

Very beautiful and it really resonated with me. Thank you

 

[OrcWitch]

I liked your poem quite a bit. Thank you :)

 

[UseItOrLoseIt]

I liked it. The form matches the content. Repetition makes the feeling of inescapability that much pronounced.

 

[ClownMe]

Beautiful