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johndaves9988
New Member
- Jul 12, 2026
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Dear SaSu members,
I am new here, and I wrote this, please let me know if you liked it, Thank You.
The night cloaked in endless black,
A shroud drawn tight where light had fled.
Your breath, a whisper in the dark,
A fragile thread the wind could snap.
The world felt heavy, a weight you bore,
Each step a battle, each day a toll.
The laughter of others, distant, thinned,
Like echoes fading from a hollow soul.
You wandered the edges of the void,
Where silence sang and shadows waltzed.
A choice, not chaos, not a cry—
Just stillness, sweet, and soft, and chance.
The stars, once guides, now seemed to taunt,
Their cold indifference, sharp as steel.
Yet in your heart, a spark remained,
A flicker of what love could do.
The clock ticked on, a metronome
Of time that couldn't be rewound.
You closed your eyes, let go the fight,
And slipped into the arms of the ground.
But in the hush, the world took note—
A breathless pause, a trembling sigh.
The sun would rise, though shadows cling,
And hearts, though broken, learn to fly.
If you're here, if you're lost in ache,
Remember: pain isn't the end.
There's still a dawn waiting just beyond the night,
And voices that'll hold you when you're too tired to mend.
I am new here, and I wrote this, please let me know if you liked it, Thank You.
The night cloaked in endless black,
A shroud drawn tight where light had fled.
Your breath, a whisper in the dark,
A fragile thread the wind could snap.
The world felt heavy, a weight you bore,
Each step a battle, each day a toll.
The laughter of others, distant, thinned,
Like echoes fading from a hollow soul.
You wandered the edges of the void,
Where silence sang and shadows waltzed.
A choice, not chaos, not a cry—
Just stillness, sweet, and soft, and chance.
The stars, once guides, now seemed to taunt,
Their cold indifference, sharp as steel.
Yet in your heart, a spark remained,
A flicker of what love could do.
The clock ticked on, a metronome
Of time that couldn't be rewound.
You closed your eyes, let go the fight,
And slipped into the arms of the ground.
But in the hush, the world took note—
A breathless pause, a trembling sigh.
The sun would rise, though shadows cling,
And hearts, though broken, learn to fly.
If you're here, if you're lost in ache,
Remember: pain isn't the end.
There's still a dawn waiting just beyond the night,
And voices that'll hold you when you're too tired to mend.