i wrote a song

[zombiegirl]

i'm a beginner producer, but i wrote a song about NPD since its one of the biggest challenges in my life. you can listen to it here! it's my first actual song i'm so proud of myself

constructive criticism is okay, compliments are encouraged of course (if you're mean i'll find you)

 

[tiger b]

A first song? It's pretty good imo. I like it. I wouldn't have thought it was someone's first recorded song.

I like the vocals, lyrics and overall production. For me, the weak point is the bass sample, a recording of an actual baseline would have been better, bit maybe that's not practical this time.

Well done.

 

[Suicidebydeath]

Interesting, I liked it.

My entire family seems to have varying degrees of narcissim, I think our brand is genetic, which means it's latent within me too but probably not disordered from an official standpoint. It probably amplifies my suffering, and suffering causes me embarassment. There is a lot of pressure to be perfect, internally and externally from my family too.

I hope you make more songs. I don't have any criticisms and I loved the vocals. You're a natural vocal singer and talented producer.

 

[zombiegirl]

Interesting, I liked it.

My entire family seems to have varying degrees of narcissim, I think our brand is genetic, which means it's latent within me too but probably not disordered from an official standpoint. It probably amplifies my suffering, and suffering causes me embarassment. There is a lot of pressure to be perfect, internally and externally from my family too.

I hope you make more songs. I don't have any criticisms and I loved the vocals. You're a natural vocal singer and talented producer.

A first song? It's pretty good imo. I like it. I wouldn't have thought it was someone's first recorded song.

I like the vocals, lyrics and overall production. For me, the weak point is the bass sample, a recording of an actual baseline would have been better, bit maybe that's not practical this time.

Well done.

thank u so much!! all of this is actually created with FL studio and the vocals are Synthesizer V!

 

[SMmetalhead36]

I loved it!

 

[flightless bird]

sounds original, cool lyrics too. well done zombiegirl.

 

[no-name9859472882]

I write music too, love your style

 

[eian]

can i sample it

 

[zombiegirl]

can i sample it

sure, all i ask is that you give credit and show me when ur done