Dumb poem I wrote

[Imthevillain]

I'm so sry. I keep posting everywhere I think I'm both slightly manic and absolutely depressed and I feel so alone in my head. Everything hurts. Whatever.

I wrote this poem about how I find it unfair that there are ppl out there fighting w just all of their being to survive, yet here I am just desperately longing to die. I know life isn't fair. I know it's not

Anyways here it is and I have more dumb poems as well.

Disclaimer: it's significantly juvenile lol

In a better world
I could take your pain
For I've so little to lose
And you've so much to gain

In a better world
No tears would we shed
Over your fight to live
And mine to find death

In a better world
You would be healed
And sry to be crass
But I could be killed

In a better world
I'd have nothing to write
As I would find peace
And you'd not have to fight

 

[Imustbefree]

Really beautiful poem. I don't usually post much in the forums, but this poem compelled me to reply. Really beautiful.

 

[Imthevillain]

Really beautiful poem. I don't usually post much in the forums, but this poem compelled me to reply. Really beautiful.

Thank you so much for that

 

[Remember-Me-Not]

I think it's a beautiful poem

 

[Dead Meat]

Very nice poem I loved it!

 

[Imthevillain]

Ty

I think it's a beautiful poem

Thank you

 

[Imthevillain]

Very nice poem I loved it!

Ty